DAY 202: Reedit some of your older material.

Today I decided to edit a portion of “El Kingo”, the comedy script we just finished and is currently in re-writes. Again, pay no mind to structure as this is a blog post and not Final Draft.

Revised Scene:

INT. RUSSIAN BASE - TENT - DAY

Steve is wrapped in a cock harness with nipple clamps on his chest. Mercedes is straddled on him, sucking on his chest hair, while using a jigsaw squirting dildo into Steve’s mouth. Steve gags. Mercedes pauses the jigsaw squirting dildo.

MERCEDES: Shup up!

Steve stops making noise.

MERCEDES (CONT’D): You know you like it. Just think, we coulda played like this all the time if you woulda just been a big boy.

Mercedes takes the jigsaw out of his mouth, slaps him in the face, overly makes out with him, and starts up the jigsaw again, shoving it back into his mouth. Steve gags. Luciana races into the tent.

LUCIANA: Leave him alone, bitch.

Mercedes stops the jigsaw and unstraddles herself off Steve.

MERCEDES: Hi there, princess.

LUCIANA: I knew you were a slut.

MERCEDES: Well, it sucks to be a goody goody like you. All the guys wanna piece of this.

Luciana races towards her and a cat fight ensues. Sex toys are being used as weapons all over the place between the two girls. Steve loves it but is getting the brunt of some of the toys to his face. Luciana wins and unties Steve.

STEVE: Thanks girly.

Steve embraces for a kiss.

LUCIANA: No time. We need to find the missile.

STEVE: Oh…yeah…right.

Steve and Luciana poke their heads out of the tent.

Above is the picture for the Facebook page to the movie. A better version will be rolled out when the time comes.