DAY 341: Edit some of your older material.
Here is an edited scene from a pilot I’m developing about the HR recruiting world. Fuk format!
INT - MANUFACTURING FACILITY - DAY
HOT SALES GIRL (25) walks into plant. Pan from left to right with all those different boxes across the screen popping up 2 at a time until whole screen is filled w/ 8 boxes (so the screen begins black and lights up as she walks past…each box represents another disaster from MALE WORKERS watching her walk through.)
BOX 1: Guy on towmotor crashing into wall.
BOX 2: Welders lifting hat up and welding sparks getting on face and eyes.
BOX 3: Guy dropping heavy hand tool on foot and wearing no steel toes—-make it known that the company doesn’t provide steel toes or hard hats due to expenses cutbacks.
BOX 4/BOX 5: Guy drops box from top area and it falls on Guy below who isn’t wearing hard hat.
BOX 6: Guy turning blue because of material handling chemicals, because he took off his respirator mask to see lady.
BOX 7: Guy falling off ladder.
BOX 8: 2 Guys running into each other and papers going everywhere.
INT. BOSS’ OFFICE
Hot Sales Girl is meeting with BOSS (55). Hot Sales Girl is blabbing and cue his narrative in his mind of what he’s thinking.
Boss: Man, I wanna get some of that.
Closeup of upper sweating lip and eyebrows. He puckers and licks his lips; tugs his balls; rubs his sweat off; starts bobbing his head; grinding teeth and then more grinding teeth; starts making donkey noises out loud.
FIREMAN (45) enters room and extinguishes him off, hosing him off with extinguisher foam.